The Joker X Harley Fanfiction Archive
Reviews For Breath
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Reviewer: HarlequinFairy Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 09, 2010 11:17 PM Title: Breath

It's short and sweet. I think I even swooned a little when he breathed into her, and the best thing is (as wrong as it may sound) this reminds me SO MUCH of my relationship with my boyfriend - mostly to do with the asphyxiation and strange but somnewhat beautiful romance between Joker & Harley. Such a turn on! >_<

You're a fantastic writer, I love this. Well done. ^_^

Reviewer: skibblezing Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 21, 2009 10:31 AM Title: Breath

*sigh*
I like you, I like you a lot.

Author's Response: Thank you hon!

Reviewer: harleygal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 31, 2009 10:20 PM Title: Breath

i like it not really as good as your others but i'd still say it deserves 9/10

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Hiskubus Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12, 2008 09:59 AM Title: Breath

:O one word: WOW! its short but its magic, i really like how you write, you described the moment beautifully, oh and the ending is great!

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I appreciate your feedback!

Reviewer: LikeSilkAgainstSandpaper Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06, 2008 03:45 PM Title: Breath

The idea that Harley knows perfectly well that she can trust him with her life is miraculous on its own. Even though she is aware that he could kill her whenever he likes and doubtless will someday, she's completely at ease with his hands around her throat.

It’s breathtaking, for lack of a better word… and no pun intended.

Author's Response: mmmmmmmmmm yes, is what I love about them. Thank you! <3

Reviewer: Harleen_Quin_82 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16, 2008 05:03 PM Title: Breath

Beautifully written.

Author's Response: Thank you muchly!

Reviewer: inner_ch1ld Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2008 09:34 PM Title: Breath

Glad to know I'm not the only one interested in breathplay.
I enjoyed this very much, I felt myself swooning with her.
Very powerful stuff here. I love it.

Reviewer: inner_ch1ld Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2008 09:33 PM Title: Breath

Glad to know I'm not the only one interested in breathplay.
I enjoyed this very much, I felt myself swooning with her.
Very powerful stuff here. I love it.

Author's Response: oh you're never the only one! ;) thanks very much!

Reviewer: JRipper9 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18, 2008 03:47 PM Title: Breath

I swooned too! It was hot and adorable.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Lovin Mistah J Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 03, 2008 01:57 AM Title: Breath

I absolutely love your stories so much because you're one of the few who (I feel) capture The Joker's personality to the T. And your Harley is captivating, as well. Very well done.

^-^

Author's Response: Thank you - that means a lot to hear!

Reviewer: Stefani Paige Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2008 11:05 AM Title: Breath

I can't even describe how much I loved this.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad it resonated!

Reviewer: RosesInSolitude Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 26, 2008 11:26 PM Title: Breath

I love your works so much! :)

Author's Response: Thank you I appreciate your support!

Reviewer: Muscheltiramisu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23, 2008 08:24 AM Title: Breath

Beautiful!
It is highly interesting that intimacy has not ultimately to do with pure sex but with other sensual things like the asphyxiation thing. When I say "sensual" you know what I mean, I guess.
I'm impressed by this fic because I think it depicts exactly (!)the relationship between the Joker and Harley.
A lot of fanfictions concentrate on subjects like sex but don't include the factor of trust and devotion.
Very well done!

Author's Response: Thank you for your thoughtful review! I do think their relationship has a lot of trust in it, even if that trust is very risky... and I think sensuality between them goes far beyond traditional sex.

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